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Pokemon Legacy - EoaM - Chapter 2 by Ari22682 Pokemon Legacy - EoaM - Chapter 2 by Ari22682

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This took me too long to write, but I've been busy...

So this is a little more seeing what the others are up to, as well as bringing around some of Ash's other friends into the story. The idea of Brock and May being husband and wife was suggested off the cuff by my friend, and in a way, has influenced that as being one of my favorite pairings in the anime.

So anyway, the smuttier stuff and the action will pick up following this chapter. Read and enjoy.

Usual disclaimers apply. These characters do not belong to me.

8/31/12 EDIT: Clarified a minor detail about May's outfit.

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cfripi Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
Very Nice. Sex scenes were a bit too long/descriptive for my liking but still good. Think there was alittle too much description of all the champs and elites. Really confusing. Portrayal of the main champs, lance, cynthia were great.

Horrible way to end the chapter, but spot on.
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OuroborosI Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you handled brock and may well together that was surprising.
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XGBlue Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I thought I'd first note this before I continued:

1) I completely ignored May's description because she's a whore, so it doesn't matter.
2) I balked when I saw that she was Brock's wife. Seems EXTREMELY out of character for both of them.

*continues reading, but stops when Cilan is talking*

The fuck is he talking about??? O.o

*continues and finishes*

That last line of dialogue. LOL Anyway, great chapter. That Unova rubbish kinda confused me, but other than that it was enjoyable... despite an odd coupling. Nicely handled. :D
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